Learning Ladybugs in MS Godfrey

The Learning Ladybugs have been a flutter with settling into the new school year. We have worked hard to set up our classroom routines and develop our Learning Plan. This has helped us to make sure we use our learning time for lifting our learning levels.

WRITING:

In Writing we have been working hard to improve our sentence structure. Below is our learning goal and success criteria as well as some of our awesome sentences!

WALT to correctly structure sentences.

WILF…

  • Each sentence makes sense and contains a full idea.
  • Sentences contain a noun and verb.
  • Capital letters are used at the start of words and for proper nouns.
  • Full stops are used to end the sentence.
  • Add detail to sentence by including who, what, where, when and why.

Our AWESOME Sentences:

Starting sentence: The lion was sleeping.

Expanded sentence: On Monday, the red lion was sleeping on a rock at 12 o’clock, with his friends.

By Dylan

 

Starting sentence: The puppy was lying down.

Expanded sentence: On one sunny Friday, the very brown fluffy puppy was lying down feeling happy on the blue carpet.

By Melisa

 

Starting sentence: The cat was jumping.

Expanded sentence: On Friday, the brown cat was jumping.

By Mason

Starting sentence: The cat was racing.

Expanded sentence: On Monday, the blue cat was racing with his cat friend.

By Jesse

 

Starting sentence: The dog ran.

Expanded sentence: On Sunday, the dog which was a German Shepherd, ran quickly to the park feeling hungry.

By Caitlin

 

Starting sentence: The dog played.

Expanded sentence: The fluffy dog played at the park, on Sunday, with the ball.

By Brooklen

 

Starting sentence: The cat sat.

Expanded sentence: On a sunny Monday, the ginger cat sat still at the fire on the soft mat.

By Emma

Starting sentence: The sausage dog was crawling.

Expanded sentence: One sunny Sunday a brown sausage dog was crawling on the grass at the park.

By Kunyrieth

 

Starting sentence: The dog ran.

Expanded sentence: On Thursday the dog ran in the backyard.

By Talan

 

Starting sentence: The kitten played.

Expanded sentence: On a hot Saturday, the cute furry kitten played with a soft ball in the backyard with a girl called Lizzy.

By Alyiah

Starting sentence: The cat was eating.

Expanded sentence: The cat was eating pieces of fish at the zoo.

By Jessica

 

Starting sentence: The dog is jumping.

Expanded sentence: On Sunday the brown dog is jumping.

By Zac

 

Starting sentence: On Wednesday the ladybug sat down.

Expanded sentence: On a windy Wednesday the spotty ladybug sat down in the park.

By Tahlia

 

Starting sentence: The cat sat down.

Expanded sentence: On a windy Monday, at 6.30pm the black and grey cat sat down on a red and brown bumpy roof.

By Holly

Starting sentence: The cat slept.

Expanded sentence: On Sunday the tubby cat slept on the grass in the backyard.

By Larissa

 

Starting sentence: Tahlia is on the trampoline.

Expanded sentence: On Friday, Tahlia was on the trampoline and she was   bouncing really high in the sky.

By Lexi

 

Starting sentence: The cat sat.

Expanded sentence: On Monday the silly cat sat on a chandelier and watched TV.

By Oliver

 

Starting sentence: Zoe was riding her horse.

Expanded sentence: On a sunny Wednesday, Zoe was riding her horse at the training ground, with Millie and her dog, Patch.

By Lathea

Starting sentence: The fish swam.

Expanded sentence: On Saturday morning, the gold fish swam slowly at the beach.

By Tess

 

Starting sentence: The dog barked.

Expanded sentence: On Monday, the spotty dog barked at the cat and mouse on the sill.

By Justin

 

Starting sentence: Dad was sleeping.

Expanded sentence: Dad was sleeping on the couch loudly, while I was playing.

By Jackson

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